enhance strategies for reading, drafting, revising, editing, and self-assessment

This outcome was reached in multiple ways and in various assignments across the board that helped me to achieve these strategies. This outcome was all achieved when my group was asked to revise and redo certain parts of our proposal abstract. The first thing my group did was reread/edit and revise  our sources, purpose and audience. We also re assessed our idea of the group. We focused on the ethical and exigence of our project and organization. With our first and second draft resubmitted we were able to realize our mistakes such as our audience not being specific enough, the main focus of our group and also some of our sources and wordings. We were able to edit all of these and make our project abstract much more clear and concise to fit the genre convention of abstracts.

Figure 8: Comments left by Professor Carr on my proposal abstract

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